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Ghost-Kewell
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the Divine Land

Joined on 6/18/14

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Animation is good, but this sort of magic ability cannot impress anyone just because it has been already used thousands times before you. Maybe, you can imagine something more original. Good luck.

OK,Thanks:D

The pond of blood on the upper body part, when it falls on the left, should appear on the ground as soon as the upper body part hits the ground (with its head). Like now, you're making too much blood appear from a slight hit which looks contradictory.

The animation looks really nice, overall. But the super power in particular is nothing original, so I don't recommend using it in a movie.. unless it's Jebus using it. Oh, Kiloru already mentioned it.
4.5/5

Yes,it just a little test,it won't be used in a movie...as you said,unless it's Jebus using it :D

It looked like he was really getting him into the air and used some strength to pull him apart.